I know it not is my best. I think it is ichigo's face about her nose. XD
and it also was the first time I tryed to make something transparent.

and don't be sorry about it I really like to get critique. it can never make me draw more bad, it can only make me better at draw.

I think this is what it means:

Vision - how do you think it looks?
Originality - is it something you think is really speciel and maybe haven't seen something like that before?
Technique - do you like my way of draw? (ex. do you like my lines not is black but the same color as what their are around?)
Impact - not sure about this. google say it also can explains with effect, action, effective.

hope it helped and welcom to deviantart^^